I had a brother and his sister draw a picture of peacock each this evening and thereafter, write an essay on the bird.  Both drawings and writings are quite pleasing, don’t you think?  


By Joanne L. (8 years old)

I like peacocks because they have very beautiful and colourful feathers.  They can spread out their feathers like a fan.  Peacocks are more beautiful than peahens.  There is a boy in my class who thinks he is very handsome.  He is as vain as a peacock.


By Jordan L. (10 years old)

I am a peacock.  My feathers are very beautiful and colourful.  When I spread out my feathers, it looks like a big colourful fan.  I am more beautiful than the peahen.  I can’t fly but who needs to fly when he is as handsome as I am?



About Katherine

Just a female who has time to do a bit of pondering and musing. Otherwise, I am on an interesting journey down the path to being a senior citizen.
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