Working with the Synonym ‘Peaceful’

Here’s another exercise on writing a single paragraph and simultaneously work with the synonym ‘peaceful’.

Unedited version

Peaceful, tranquil, calm

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Sitting on a chair and reading a book in my wide large peaceful garden makes me calm and tranquil.  The colourful butterflies are flying over the beautiful flowers to get honey from them.  The birds are chirping on the apple tree.  I am taking a nap under the warm weather now.

Edited version

Relaxing with a good book in my large peaceful garden always calms and soothes my soul.   Colourful butterflies flits to and fro the pretty flowers, pausing to draw sweet nectar.  The birds are chirping away merrily in the apple tree. This tranquil scene never fails to lull me to sleep beneath the shade of the apple tree.

 

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Just a female who has time to do a bit of pondering and musing. Otherwise, I am on an interesting journey down the path to being a senior citizen.
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